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Think about your means of dramaturgy, I mean what is the difference between second and a third thing he puts on a door? The third thing has smaller effect and it seams that your hero got stupid or he is giving up. Good luck.

- Srdan Rodic

Very creepy concept. I love how the lead character's struggle isn't so much getting out of the house, but to hold on to his sanity for dear life. I think when the black thing finally hits him, thats him breaking from reality.

- Dave Kilgo

hey dan... great work... i would have preferred it without the voiceover too... once it had been established that he's housesitting... very creepy :)

- Anshul Joshi

Great work Dan! very creative and fun to watch. I see what Lee and Bradley mean but also the whole house sitting thing is an extra layer u couldn't have gotten without dialogue. Good luck!

- alfredo Diaz

nice and creepy.........loved the establishing shot....good acting and quite a scary movie....ending was good too!!all the best!!- jai nat ("The footprints")

- Jai Nat

The ending definitely made me jump. I agree with Lee that the narration is superfluous, since it doesn't provide any information that the visuals don't already provide. Good job!

- Bradley Tangonan

Love this creepy idea!!! Perhaps some scary music would work fine with it. Good luck!

- Pablo Olmos_Arrayales

Sorry, I meant "the actor was ok"

- Elias Sanchez

Great idea with the haunted door, i hope the actor were ok in the end.

- Elias Sanchez

Wow-goosebumps at the end-enjoyed it.

- Joseph Wulczynski

Interesting concept... It didn't really need the narrative because the visuals and the dialogue were really enough to explain what was going on. I too want to know what the black thing was ;-)

- Lee Sjostrom

Great ending. The build up felt a little long, but the payoff was great.

- Lee Isserow

Neat concept with an interesting (albeit highly ambiguous) ending. Can I ask what the black thing opening towards the camera is?

- Jon Lucas