Same comment as the other pixelvision short in the contest: it seemed like you were going somewhere, but you didn't quite do as much as you could've. While the other film relies too much on the written messages, yours relies too much on the voice over (mine does too) and you don't do enough with the images. Pixelvision cameras have so much promise when it comes to playing with what you see and the basic premises of both these shorts weren't bad, they just needed a bit more. Hope to see more from both of you soon.