Interesting effort. Not sure how this fits into the theme of "the Secret". You gotta pay attention to the details: why was the main soldier wearing black pants instead of full army gear? Your shots also looked a little washed out... 

i like your movie, but like michael told you...what is the secret?you need use this for "the game" its better, you do a great work! keep doing...and go better. and try do the scenes more faster, maybe use more takes, and play with the screen. i love war movies and this stuff, my dream is gonna be on the war on sniper. have a look on the serie "band of brothers", and "over there". look the photography and get some ideas.