Intelligent, I like the way you handled the "secret" theme. Interesting how you got the effect of the guy "walking on water", although you didn't quite achieve it, the solution to the problem you were faced with (in terms of realization) worked well within the general storyline. I do not like the shot with the ball on the water (found it kind of plain), but that's just a personal prejudice because I think I've seen too much of that. (Online serial, "Joppa" does a lot of ball-on-water shots) 

i really enjoy your movie, keep working, i like the takes and effects. i wish you lucky!!!see ya! 

very good use of sound. 

I liked a lot the camera and the overall mood of the short. Great job!