Your writing was great. natebower (Belief) 

yea i have to agree you had a great script! well done! 

one of the few here that actually tells a story! and a good one too! i enjoyed it very much! --Joseph Chiang (Dominos) 

esta chistocisima, aunque me gustaria que al final no le pusieras el titulo de nuevo, no es necesario.Buena Ricardo 

excellent story! very clever!---John Carstarphen (certain women of a southern province) 

BACAN!!! me gusto mucho, y la chica esta guapisima. pues suerte chequen minuto de fernando reyes 

Good one..Music was missing i felt. Very creative i would say..- Deepak(G-4) 

Very reflective and existential filmmaking. I like this. 

great film, very good script 

Good concept and nice script 

Es que como es un Palindromo entonces queria que acabe igual que inicia, pero al reves. Era un poco la idea, pero tienes razon que pudiera haber funcionado sin los titulos. 

Yeah, it was missing. Do you know any good sites to get royalty-free music? 

Thank you. 

Gracias. Tu pelicula tambien esta bacan. Suerte! 

The sad thing about our generation though is that we are so used to sensory overload that we expect music. Think of the oldies. When people were talking or it was the body of the film there was usually no music. So Ricardo mi gusta tu pelicula porque era differente y no tuve musica, no ocupados (worries?). Sorry if my spanish is terrible I'm not fluent but I try to talk in it as much as I can because I loooove it!ciao ricardo, espero que roma esta bien,~Jasmainne (jaz) 

Thank you. I´ve actually thought about that a lot (the idea of just images and no sound) and came up with a 12 minute short a while back which has no sound at all. No music, dialogue, or anything. I think it came out ok, and since you seem to be interested in that sort of thing, maybe I´ll send you a copy online (if you want). I´m glad you liked this short, best wishes. -Ricardo 

One of my favorite directors, the Taiwanese director Tsai Ming-Liang, is well-known for his films with minimal dialogue and no music at all! And I love them!