once again a very good job! good postproduction. watch mine (to die again) good luck
interesting post production, love the end its very betwixed, keep it up man
daanish,,admired your work always...good luck mate! 'TAKEN' daniel stephenson
Good effort Daanish. The ending I found very interesting!
That's some jazzy post-production. I really like the sense of confusion you get across.
Thanks Vangelis :) Glad i managed to do that! And thanks to everyone who has been able to watch my movie and comment !
Great editing and cinematography, Daanish. Very impressive work. Is the music from Garageband by chance?--Cameron ("Lucidity")
haha yess garageband. Well the murder scene and the hallucination are!
p.s great work on yours, it was actually very well done!
A well shot film with an equally well written script! Kept me glued till the end!
Good script, good editing, I just think that the part where Detective Lewis gets kill, needed to be a little more dramatic, more struggle between the him and the killer. Good Luck.
thanks for the comment Jardiel! :D yes i think i should have made it a bit more dramatic but it was Col. Andrews who he ends up killing.
Daanish. I found the voice over coupled with highlighting the pertinent parts of the letter a bit heavy-handed. I would have gone with one or the other. Probably the latter. One way you could have made the assasination more "dramatic" is if you got the camera in closer and used a few extreme close-ups. Good work and good effort.
Thanks again for the advice Ryan! Always helps me improve my film making. I was really contemplating the higlighting / voice over but I wasn't sure if people would catch on to the names in a 3 min movie. I wanted to make it clear who he killed. Thanks again for the comment :) always a pleasure to hear from you!
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