Alessandro,Bellissimo!! I think you conveyed the concept very succinctly, interestingly we had a similar idea of YOU as the VOYEUR, please watch-"YOU" by Khan and Kavita
Good concept. I would ended, following your text structure, writing in the last shot: you, voyeur? no? why did you kept watching until the end fo the short then?. Keep up with the good and simple work.
i like how you play with the idea of watching here, but i wish you had chosen an image that is more voyeuristic to watch. though voyeurism doesn't have to be sexual, it usually implies that the viewer gets some sort of pleasure from looking. i like the simplicity though, and the text works nicely. check out "plastic dream" (sonia)
It has a very interesting quality to it, almost like an advertising for voyeurism. Simple, concise and good. If you have a chance watch my short SEE and tell me what you think.
really interesting job with this one Alessandro. It's amazing that the shot was the same but i stayed interested the whole time! - Daanish (Publice Service Annoucement)
Great!!!!...Alessandro, I like it well done "Voyeur,Divakar Ghodake"
simple but effective!!...
Loved the composition. really nice shot. (Nate Bower - "Safe" - pg. 4)