Hey, I really like the way this was cut, well done! (Bryan - "Lucas and Mabel" 

ummmmm! Pasquale, a bit too much of blood. Good luck. Fée 

Hmm, weird, really weird. I like the apathy of the actors and the fast nature of the cutting. I don't know what it all means but I was intrigued by it. Good coloring and lighting too. -Brian (Addiction Control) 

That was rad dude!your editing was good, nice idea with clean then bloody cuts, i loved the blood!!!!! and the random moan/growl of the one guy, it was freaking awsum, watch mine its also bloody! "My goodbye story" 

Interestingly bizarre.. was that a butter knife? 

Very nice. For those rapid cuts, did u actually rapidly move the camera or was that an effect??? 

I think your editing and rythm is very good, but maybe an older actor would have given the short an interesting contrast. If you have a chance see my short The Patient and tell me what you think. 

Mmmm, I'm normally opposed to gorno, but this one...I really like it. It's very psychological in a sense and it kept my mind engaged, wondering what the story behind the victims was. Excellent work by your crew, especially the sound guy, and great editing. Check out Homunculus by Vangelis Mylonas, only a few drops of blood here! 

An interesting overall piece. I would be interested in knowing what kind of HD camera you used (the color rendering looks strange though I suppose that could easily be color correction. If you get a chance take a look at my submission 'Grievous Angel' - I think it will be right up your alley. 

Nice sound. Good Job 

Yep, really nicely done,compelling and repelent. I loved the disappearing and reapearing of the characters, it's one of the qualities of our dreams and nightmares which makes them hard to explain to people. Not sure about the performances, I think you could have got something more interesting than "I'm a psycho" acting out of them. Really nicely shot and edited though and a great concept for a short Have a look at my film "the dose". I'm interested to hear if none English people get it. 

i really like the visual style and the concept and editing are unique. i think your actors are the lowpoint here - they sort of seem like high-schoolers reciting shakespeare... i just think the lines could have been read and portrayed better to create the chilling effect you were going for. otherwise, really well done. let me know what you think of my piece, "the clinic: subsistence 17" by sonia kifferstein 

Nothing much that haven't already been said. Suggestive, and technically well done. But honestly I couldn't relate to the story much. Good luck. 

I really liked how you worked with the camera. Great work in all the technical area! Daniel Barosa (For Sale) 

you captured excelently the wierd feeling of dreams and nightmares ... techincally is also impresive, good job 

Very well made. Great set design and lighting combined with nice photography make this film very interesting.Good luck1Greg Karpinski - director of "Clinic"