Falling (Off A Cliff)

Contest Name :The Clinic, Submission Date :09-25-2007, Uploaded By : Oren
Directed By :  Oren Benamor, Filmmaker/ waitor,Baltimore MD,
Shot On: Canon HD XL A1, Edited On: Adobe Premeire Pro,  Crew Members: 2  Duration:
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Inspiration: Brief meaningful moments, put together
Other Info: A mans life flashes before his eyes as he commits suicide by falling down a rocky cliff

Cool concept, how did you get the shot of the camera falling off the cliff? (Bryan - "Lucas and Mabel") 
The short has a nice pace, but I think that the acting is a bit off. The situation is dramatic as it is, so maybe you didn't need to accentuate it. Nice work. If you have a chance see my short The Patient and tell me what you think. 
Nicely shot and well edited. I also like te music.The lighting could be better. Good work.Best of luckGreg Karpinski-short film "Clinic" 
I like your take on what could have easily been a cliche-ridden piece. It moves with a refreshing energy, I like it. Good luck and check out Homunculus by Vangelis Mylonas 
Hey Oren,nice work. I believe I didn't fully get the ending at the teeth health clinic. Thinking about it, though. And that's what short stories, no matter if they are text based or films, are supposed to do. They should make their consumers think. 
Really interesting.Good going.Smita (The V.V.I.P) 
thanks for the comment, it was actually a teen clinic, it probably was unclear...but that was supposed to be when they met, but ive had it interpreted different ways...either way thanks for your comment, good luck to you 
I liked the way you did the shots for the actual falling down the cliff. I had considered different ways of doing this in my film (went for green screen) but did not consider what you did. I also liked how you intersperce these shots as you jump back in time. Well done!!! David A Elliott ("Rob Ridgeway Mobile Massage Therapy") 
One of the most purely entertaining films i've seen on here. you really care about what's going to happen to Brian. I was also curious how this was going to tie into the topic and I thought the end paid that off really well. Great editing and music too! -Brian (Addiction Control) 
How did you do the shots that he's falling of the cliff? Really liked your idea. Good luck! Daniel Barosa (For Sale) 
In Prague I study Meisner and act in a children's theatre. It's a great city once you settle in. Of the film schools, I know PCFE. I've seen and been in some of their films. They're usually long, self-indulgent, and not very interesting. They have nice equipment, but your work is already better. Mark 
I agree with honorato about the acting. It jarred and put me off what was probably quite a good story. Loved the cliff shot though. Take a look at "the dose" and let me know what you think. 
Really good story, i might have prefered another shot at the cliff at the end. Good luck. 
Nice work guys! really nice! 
thanx for your comment on my film "My goodbye Story", the only problem with this film is that i cant stand it if a relationship goes like that,dont take me wrong i digged the film, but the situation he was in was sad, it is one of the worst feelings, loneliness is horrible, i liked how you made me feel the story, your on my shortlist, good luck Oren 
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