You did a amazing work. Realy good short film. Fée
Editing is super. - Jonathan (The Wrong Clinic)
Very interesting story well done, good acting. You are on my short list for sure . Fée
Enjoyed it. Good acting. Thought the deciding moment at the end was a bit weak. Could he do something different to make the doctor think he's not ready for the outside world? Mark ("The Perfect Pair")
Thanx for the input Mark. To tell you the truth you are probably right. I aprechiate your honesty and I would really like to here some more constructive criticism. I know people don't like to do it so they don't make "enemies" but in my chaise I would rather like to here from people who dig movies ( like all of you) what they feel went wrong in my chaise and what could have been done better. So thanx once more for criticism and if anybody have some thoughts about the film except standard "good job, i liked it" feel free to tell me, I'm very interested. Thanx in advance and thanx Mark. P.S. I really mis forum pafe on this site
Great short. I was wondering if he really did see what he thought he saw. I really like how you used clipping of the sound's high end to make it disturbing, generally the audio was top notch. The acting is good. I think you could have used a few more angles in the beginning for variety's shake and to establish the surroundings, although this is probably hard to do when you only got 3min. Good luck and please check out "Homunculus" by Vangelis Mylonas
good editing,acting and very nice CÝNEMATOGRAPHY.Best luck.
This is in a league all its own! Tremendous acting, camera-work, editing. Great short. -Brian (Addiction Control)
I agree with mark. The ending just ruin it for me. It's such a great idea and very well done in all aspects. It reminded me of Shawshank Redemption. Good luck.
I liked this film overall and the direction the ending took was not as I expected (which I liked). However, I agree the reason did let it down a little. David A Elliott ("Rob Ridgeway Mobile Massage Therapy")
I liked the acting very much and the feel of the film itself interesting. On the down side I think the editing wasn't quite right in the beginning - especially during the dialogue (too abrupt). Luckily it got better after the doctor left. Altogether it is a well made short film with high quality production value. I also agree with others that a different ending could have worked better. Best of luck Sven!Greg Karpinski - director of "Clinic"P.S. I would appreciate constructive criticism on mine please. Thanks
Great concept, I really liked the film a lot.Smita(The V.V.I.P)