Great shots. The entire list was really lovely to look at: crack in the door, reflection in the microwave, cropping the head out as nick ties his tie. Very good eye. I don't even think the ending needed that little twist, there was so much heart in the project already it would have made a great drama.
Lovely black and white. I normally don't like voice-overs, but it worked here. What kind of sound set-up did you use? Good job. Please check "Guitar Heroes" by Vangelis Mylonas
I really liked your black and white. Nice contrast. Good shots also... all very beautiful images. Daniel (File 4413)
Hi Steven very nice. i agree with Rpwojcicki (Richard P Wojcicki), the ending wasnt really necessary as it felt to already be quite a truthful and honest film. I think the twist ending might have spoiled that effect but suffice it to say it was unexpected.Nice lighting. Liked it alot. Got my vote...
Hey Steve. Liked your film. I actually was really into your ending. From the comments I was expecting a twist, but I didnt guess that one. I think everyone below got it right though, that each shot looked great. Good luck. Would love you to critique my film.
what's your movie Murray?
Classy work Steve, the angles and lighting were pro, and great choice of shots. Wasn't expecting a twist, so it worked out well.
Holy S@#T! I did not expect that ending AT ALL. That was CRAZY!! OMG! In a good way.
Nice visual storytelling, clean and simple. Congratulations. Check out mine "la hora" and Desviación".
The twist at the end was nice.Good Work.Paras R.Gandhi -director of "Pants Down"
Great storytelling. I liked the monologue most of all, simple and down to earth
A well crafted film with a totally unexpected ending! Enjoyed it a lot! --Joseph
Hey very well done. Surprising endind. NIce B
Very good. Didn't expect the end.
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