cool idea for the holidays theme! nice twist at the end - Daanish and David ("home for the Holidays" pg. 3) 

Haha! Wow! Great ending! I really enjoyed this film, particularly the performances and the music. Good editing too. Nice job! Good luck! -Brian ("Christmas in Reno") 

image storytelling i liked , subtle style carla egerer (dreamdog girl in bagdad) 

I really like this however I have some advice. when filming convos you have to stick to the 180 rule which means you have to place the camera within one half circle and stay within it. Its a classic mistake and I had problems with it on my film. look it up Good job anyway and good luck!!'Home for xmas' danyl stephenson 

I'm so glad someone called me on that. I know that myself about crossing the axis but totally forgot on the day. I guess that happens when you're doing run and gun style and people are telling you to get out of their house! You got me, dude! 

Lovely quirky story - I totally got the different places they were coming from. Good reflection of the tension. Well done. Shirin