I like.. intense and unexpected. well done. watch mine on page 15, "Five more Minutes" 

Cool movie. Nice plot turns! Shot nicely! Good work! 

I liked the interaction on the bus best. Well written and acted. 

hmm well done i like it 

Liked this - was never sure where it was going to go and you managed to maintain the suspense right until the end. Well done 

Great work yet again Dean. Shortlisted. Lee (Necromantic) 

Great work. Well shot. Cheers. 

unexpected ending, great work. 

Great job from the actors, and well shot, especially for permission to use a bus. Unfortunately the idea of stealing a kidney like this was debunked on the television show Urban Legends shown here last week. 

But shortlisted for the technical and performances.  

Yes I have been told even by my best friend that this story was obvious which was a challenge to make it unexpected and hopefully add the other elements - having an unfortunate name/destiny and her rather interesting occupation of collecting donations for charities! I have a really great team working with me, and we want to just get better and better at making films. We are making another film at present but have to raise funds for this as we want to use the RED. Fingers crossed. 

Yes I have been told even by my best friend that this story was obvious which was a challenge to make it unexpected and hopefully add the other elements - having an unfortunate name/destiny and her rather interesting occupation of collecting donations for charities! I have a really great team working with me, and we want to just get better and better at making films. We are making another film at present but have to raise funds for this as we want to use the RED. Fingers crossed. 

saw the end coming but still a great piece of work. i hope people watch this before reading comments which have spoilers. shortlisted. 

Excellent work, very well shot and great story. Definitely shortlisted. 

Excellent film!!! Loved everything in this movie, except the name of the main character - is more suitable for a comedy (specially at the ending). But great great work!