I liked that you dared to create your own little sci-fi universe, and the specifics of the doors and their mechanisms are cool. Also, you deserve a lot of credit for making the most of limited resources and still giving the piece some scope. The problem is that the mythology is a bit too vague; as a piece that is intended to stand on its own, it's just a bit too confusing, and doesn't tell enough of a story to stay with us. I need to know more about these characters and their world to get invested in it. Still, very well done, and ambitious. {Jury Member}

This totally reminded me of the Buffy series.