very funny ending 

Some great moments, and a great ending! nice style. 

Good job Bryan, i think your film's really funny and it's got some great moments. Your film is highly original and stood true to the theme. I see that the angles were slanted, you were probably going for a obsurd feel to the piece. It works, but needs more slanted close-ups I felt. All in all, tight filmaking! 

very unconvincing performances and I couldn't find a direct relationship with the inspiration of the film.  

cool movie.. i can say.. some shots wer really good.. u have got a good sence of humour .. with a unique editing style... all the best brother 

hahaha.. amazing film dude.. i'm in love with the damsel in distress.. no not the one with the cycle.. lol.. really well done... how did you do the gun shot? can you post a tutorial on it.. or just message me.. overall great stuff.. rock on! 

I love film noir bub, and this made me smile, which is a nice bonus. I wish you all the luck, and hope that we each get to see a longer cut of our films. 

Real nice classic feel to this n i liked the cheesy humour.  

Very funny, Keep it up 

very cool. great use of shadows and locations and irreverent voice-over. great intro and outro sountrack and titles, too. i too am curious to know how you did the gunshot effect... let us know if you can.