The Piano

Contest Name :The First Day, Submission Date :10-04-2008, Uploaded By : Ari
Directed By :  Ari Verwoerdt, Student,,
Shot On: 8.5mm Camera, Edited On: Ulead Video Studio,  Crew Members: 1  Duration: 1.80 mins
Pretoria ,Gauteng , South Africa   Views: 464
Inspiration: Films like The Ring,The Grudge,this would be my first completed short film ever,so be gentle with your comments please.

u gave me some creeps man!!! good one! 
Very good. Reminded me of The Ring. :) 
Good Job on Your first film. The shots were really cool and the girl was creepy. The story needs some work but thats ok. Don't be afraid to be yourself and show the world something they've never seen before. Shortlisted 
Terrific first attempt. You probably could have carried the story a little forward which would have added to the creeps. Overall, good one. 
Nice effort with a good idea. Here's my tip: leave the subtitles on screen for a little longer. 
Good job on the look of the short. 
Thanks to everyone of you who viewed my film,and thank you for your comments. 
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