Well directed and shot. Loved the lighting. I wanted this to keep going. It feels like the beginning of a longer short. Enjoyed this very much.
great atmosphere given by the light...and the voice!
i loved this place very quiet, like in a garage with those three character saying nothing but smoking and playing playstation...a tiny bit gloomy, but very arty!
Watch our short for this competition : chair on the ceiling
ralph and theo - holy crap! this is great. the visuals, camera movements, b/w, voice-over, EVERYTHING is perfect. the quick cuts with the coughing and the stuff with the video game... priceless.
grreat film, Sam. lighting, camera movement and especially the voice-over. I can tell you appreciate the craft of filmmaking. you made my short-list.
Thanks for watching my film, "Handsome Pete Plans a Party", and for your comments. He's STILL building the ice hotel--deadline for party--February 7th!
great shots. editiing... everythting
Probably the most well done short in this competition. I love how the characters describe in their own words how they slowly shut themselves out from the world. And they don't even realize what's happening. They see themselves as normal. VERY well done.
very nicely done, the almost documentary narrative style is working great, and all the crafts are great, the camera, light, editing ... well done
Nice lighting and editing
Very good. I like the simplicity of it and the strength that alone brings. I like the big screen cut in which it seems like they are floating. The voice-over sounds clean and genuine. It's almost like a PSA commercial against Mary-J. Nice. Very nice.
BRAVO on photography, style, pace and acting/voiceover, Sometimes less has more impact and you delivered this well in the storytellilng.
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