Interesting story. Well done
Please check out my film "together again" and let me know what you think.
I enjoyed the simplicity of the story and the acting. Simplicity to me is a good thing!
I agree with Chris... it .. your heartfelt simplicity comes through, I think you could have brought the soundtrack in earlier... but still. Its good.
I liked the simplicity of it as well. Also, I would have liked the audio to come in a bit sooner. I was going to turn up the sound, lol... Really liked the shots of the girl. Nicely done! lee~ 'Backwards In Time'...
Quiet and pretty compelling. I almost wished that there were a few more images of the woman or a few more visuals (which were really well shot) but I understand that you were going for the videoblog look - a great idea. Good luck!
The way you shot this worked beautifully. The images from the woman are sad and nostalgic and complement peferctly the simple videoblog format. I really liked your short... Congrats.
Daniel Barosa - "Dusk in Limbo"
Excelent film. The way the memory of the woman appears is nostalgic, sad and compelling in its simpleness and lightness. Its a nice shot and a crude declaration of the character. Great film and surely got my vote!
There is something very lovely about this short.
Awesome! Very effective.. Especially when the music comes in toward the end. You really managed to evoke great emotion in those shots. Good job!
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