Watched both versions of your film and I think I prefer this one just because it features that 'turn' in mood halfway through, with the images, music, and narration getting much more intense. It may have benefitted from being a little shorter, but otherwise this was a nice piece with thoughtful narration. 

I agree with Dan about this one... I also liked the extra stuff at the end, seeming to give it more purpose. Please watch my entry, 'Deadline'. 

It is not a wanted theme, but I prefer this one over shorter version. It could be thought as in connection with a mind blabbing while you are on the run for something. But it is just a massage from you not connected with contest. I like that and I appreciate that you appreciate yourself but not making it look like something which is not. Also, it is just your wishes and they come from the past because they are just thoughts and all the thoughts are past, are not they? So, signs are also past and you do not want to seek for them, because you will get signs which you want, not the truth. Going somewhere does not need a thought about other questions but: where is it, how would I travel and what will I bring with me and...you have to go and see, then you will know will you survive. Good luck what ever you decide to do! 

Wooohhh, funky dude, Promising young actress! Different, but works in 3 min format. ------Director of 'The Time Is Now'----- 

good piece of art! loved it 

It reminds me the terrific 'Tarnation' by Jonathan Caouette. Really beautiful, simple and moving.