Liked the switch in tone at 1:20. The actor's expressions sold it. During that whole future-telling scene, the shots can be a lot stronger if you follow the 180-degree rule (setting up the camera on one side of the action).
Well done! Interesting concept, good acting, production value! Please watch my 'Surprise!'
Liked your film Kamal. Though I do believe that it could have been made in Hindi or your vernacular and then subtitled. As I think the language compromised the performance of your actors. All the best for the film and thanks for commenting on my film. Cheers!
Nicely edited and shot. The editing added nicely to the pacing and the fragmenting of reality as you reached the end.
hey i liked the editing part and story is awesome. And acting of all the actors are also good.
I liked when the fortune teller smiled when the two guys weren't looking :) Good film all around. Please check out my film "Perspective"
exactly ... that one shot is stuck in there in my head where ... this fortune teller smiles... good pace and vfx.... i was on the edge!!
I agree it is a terrific shot when the two turn to each other and the fortune-teller is seen through their profiles in the background. I also feel the original language would've added not taken away. I like how we were "tricked" twice in the end.
I like the music and editing kamal.I must say u worked hard in editing.I like the shot when astrologer smiles when they r watching each other.And the last shot of movie when sole went from the body..
Very well made film and the story was very engaging. Well done! Please check out "Speeating" for some laughs :)
Hey Kamal good stuff yaar!! Very engaging and some nice slick editing as well man!!
Well done, especially editiong and music. But did he really die?
ya andrea Thats y i wrote that wording in the end
Hey man, thanks for the comment. Interesting short, very cool.
nice short. liked your editing. good work
If he had been wearing the right "Jyotish" gem, maybe a ruby,
or yellow sapphire! the outcome may have been different.
Good film, thought provoking, and a good job with the
tricky editing at the end.
If he had been wearing the right "Jyotish" gem, maybe a ruby,
or yellow sapphire! the outcome may have been different.
Good film, thought provoking, and a good job with the
tricky editing at the end.
Amazing........
No one Stop it if he knew
What will Happen to him in Next Second
NO one Knowzzzzzzzzz
hey nice creativity. did ya act in dis film??
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