to my mind film''MASK'' is too boaring.there is nothing interesting. 

strong visual storytelling...not sure you needed the subtitles what happened in the middle? rough cut b/n car and table scene anyway well done 

I agree with dogbew, I don't think you need the subtitles, in fact I think they weaken the film by stating your message too bluntly. I think that the message is strong enough in the visuals that most people will understand most of what you're saying and them thinking about the film instead of being told everything will be more powerful. Also I think you have a great potential for an interesting sound design here instead of dance music. Good job, keep working. 

Great start, but weak on development and I agree, you didn't need to hold our hand all the way through. Not an original idea and it reminds me of a classic twilight zone episode.