hello!i watch your movie before, is first i watch on this competition, i like your idea, simple and tell everything, like everybody look and wait for something, whats going to happen? like a joke, show everything in the end. if i do this, or better get just the idea, put this guy like some of love boy, he likes the girl, is a artist, and she don't look him, never, he finish the draw and go away, maybe he never exists, just the draw, maybe he kill himself. but kill is for me, always have to kill, now, you do a good job. simple, but good. try next time use more takes with details on your characters, get special things, like when he drink, or the girl put food on the plate. and when i watch the first time i imagine him drawning she. but its good. keep doing.