cool idea and really well written! 

Good dialogues and great lighting. Good ending. 

Great lighting? I've seen better with a torch! Scorsese would be horrified! Random Cantering and in the wrong direction on your lead character made him submissive. Failing to light the older mans face was a oversight. And "Yet Another Chess Game" there was no strategy to the interaction with the characters, so the game just be juxtaposed to the dialogue, and that failed. 

alan... ive been tracking your comments through the films posted here... very intruiged by now. and now that you have spoken of chess.. wondering if you have seen my film.. waiting for your backlash on it.. see you there 

Good one! Nice script and acting! 

Isn't it little pretentious to write such a thing "combination of styles of Bergman and Scorsese"-that's for critics to write but not director. White shirt guy-not so good acting, and not at all good voice, maybe should've been different cast. Black suit guy is ok.