i read all about the dungeons and dragons cult for one of my classes! funny stuff! good narration! 

Boy you have me in two minds. One says that a bit of letterboxing and coulour tweaking really would have set this apart, although the low light will have slowed you down. Some more steady camera shots, a tripod really helps. On the alternative a more rough and fast moving getting into the story would have worked as well. You kinda came half way in between. The Credit Art was spectacular and very creative. I hope it's all original! 

Brilliant. Love the fact that his parents try to get him into something "more normal" ha ha ha