Interesting! I like the way the story ends! --Joseph (Dominos) 

"im going to die today" cool! loved the time lapse 

Loved the street ambient. What a great way to make it real. natebower(Belief) 

Hey dude, good concept. And even i made the mistake in subtitles in my first film.Check out the colour of the fonts depending on the background.And either add a background music or mute it when there is only noise. These are just suggestions which i got in my first film and i'm sharing it with u. The concept and the ending was really good. All the best bhaijaan!Deepak(G-4) 

You've got great shots in here! Opening was especially great. Liked the message as well! Keep up the good work! 

I love the cultural aspect, seeing the streets of India and people speaking in Hindi instead of making your actors speak in English. Makes it more real, somehow. Loved the concept. - Ricardo Salcedo (El Arte de Lavar Platos)