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Contest Name :The Prophecy, Submission Date :06-30-2007, Uploaded By : Chris
Directed By :  Chris McGuire, ,,
Shot On: Canon hd, Edited On: FCP,  Crew Members: 2  Duration: 3.00 mins
, , United States   Views: 275 Other Info: CORRECTION The close-up of the envelope says: UNITED STATES DRAFT BOARD
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Good message! There were some great shots in there! The one thing I would suggest is turning the vocals up and music down to keep a bit of a better balance. That way your dialogue will be the primary thing reaching the audience. You had a good script and I wouldn't want people missing it! 
I agree with Daanish, turning the music down and vocals up would help a lot. But the message is very good one! and script is also good. Deepak(G-4) 
I agree 100 percent. I actually was getting married as a friend finished up the edit last minute. He obviously missed that important detail. So it goes........Thanks for the feedback 
I agree with Deepak about the music volume, but yeah, you do have a good script. -Ricardo Salcedo (El Arte de Lavar Platos) 
hey well then congratulations on the wedding! 
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