Good message! There were some great shots in there! The one thing I would suggest is turning the vocals up and music down to keep a bit of a better balance. That way your dialogue will be the primary thing reaching the audience. You had a good script and I wouldn't want people missing it! 

I agree with Daanish, turning the music down and vocals up would help a lot. But the message is very good one! and script is also good. Deepak(G-4) 

I agree 100 percent. I actually was getting married as a friend finished up the edit last minute. He obviously missed that important detail. So it goes........Thanks for the feedback 

I agree with Deepak about the music volume, but yeah, you do have a good script. -Ricardo Salcedo (El Arte de Lavar Platos) 

hey well then congratulations on the wedding!