I like the way you create suspense, but maybe it becomes a little repetitive before the solution is presented. I think the eye at the end is a great idea. If you have a chance watch my short SEE and tell me what you think. 

Every thing is in the end? A bit long but weel done. Good luke . Fée 

haa ha..Nice Thomas...well done Good luck "Voyeur, Divakar Ghodake" 

Great ending. A little long, but great ending. (Nate Bower - "Safe" - pg. 4) 

very cool ending. You built it up nicely as well! good job - Daanish (Publice Service Annoucement) 

Hello Thomas, I really liked the idea, the whole concept, but there are parts in which the character reacts to something by clicking on the typewriter, know that u let this part till the end, but in order to build more tension the character must give us the sensation of being trapped in his own house, or something like that, anyway the ending is a big surprise for us all, and the big eye seems to torture him staring at him.Nice story.(The crystal eye)