Sick Day

Contest Name :The Clinic, Submission Date :10-01-2007, Uploaded By : Dennis
Directed By :  Dennis Mason, Software QA Manager,NJ, USA,
Shot On: HDV, Edited On: Adobe Premiere Pro 2,  Crew Members: 1  Duration: 2.99 mins
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Inspiration: The entrance to the building where I work has a very "clinic" feel to it. My co-workers agreed to be in the film and I shot around my work schedule.
Other Info: This is my first completed film and and I think it`s a bit rough around the edges, but I am very happy to have finished it in time for the contest.
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This is actually pretty solid for a first movie! I would take out everything in that "other info" out because it doesn't give the viewer much hope. Nice shots and editing. Not bad -Brian (Addiction Control) 
I think you did very well! If you didn't mention it's your first film, I would never have guessed it! Good luck! 
Don't sell yourself short. That was good. 
Brian, Joseph, Dave: thanks for the encouraging comments. I really appreciate the pick-me-up.Brian: I took your advice and removed the downer comments in the Other Info. 
very amusing. great punchline at the end. reminds me of the film i made (theme on going to the wrong clinic). please check mine out. - Jonathan (The Wrong Clinic) 
Well done. Good acting, and a brilliant storry, which is the most important think.- Stanka Gjuric ("Alone") 
Heh, good writing. I enjoyed that, good acting all around and great ideas. It's not as rough as you think it is and I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what you will do next. Good luck and please check out "Homunculus" by Vangelis Mylonas 
I enjoyed your film. It was a bit slow in the beginning but had a lovely twist. It is funny and cleverly written. Nicely shot and edited too. Probably would have worked better if it was a bit shorter but apart from that it's great.Good luck!Greg Karpinski - director of "Clinic" 
Really Cool,I enjpyed watching it.Smita(The V.V.I.P) 
Very good short film Dennis...well done and very great en,this is your firt one? I did mine the last day of the contest except the Miguel part with the dog. 
Great film, Dennis! Nice location, it definitely has the clinic feel. Well done! (Bryan - "Lucas and Mabel") 
i loved when he dropped the book, his comment was FREAKING AWSUM! youv got my vote 
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