The Wrong Clinic

Contest Name :The Clinic, Submission Date :10-01-2007, Uploaded By : Jonathan Aryeh
Directed By :  Jonathan Wayne, Filmmaker,Pittsburgh,
Shot On: Sony A1-U, Edited On: Final Cut Pro HD,  Crew Members: 0  Duration: 2.94 mins
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Inspiration: Immigration, Lost through Translation, Deception, Screwball comedy
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1 crew member, thats hard to do, i liked it, liked your female actor, and the cricket sounds, nice coloring, even tone thought, good work buddy, take a look at mane "My Goodbye Story" 
actually, no crew members! i was the only one (camera-man included). i just had to change it to 0 from 1 actually. thanks for your comments! 
Good performances. It'd be great if you could take things from different angles for variety's shake, but I know how hard it is to do it by yourself (I do the same). Good luck and please check out "Homunculus" by Vangelis Mylonas. 
Nicely edited and well shot. Well done considering no crew to help you. Good sound tooGood luck!Greg Karpinski - director of "Clinic" 
I don't understand the point of the story. We always knew she was going to the wrong clinic because of the title. It's no suprise to us, especially when he says 16-20 weeks, that it's an abortion clinic. So where does the comedy come from? It's like telling the punchline of a joke whilst you're telling it. It's a shame because you've managed to put a real hollywood gloss on the whole thing. It looks brilliant. Let me know what you think of "the dose" 
Wow, tremendous performances from your actors and very impressively shot. Great job, Jonathon. (Bryan - "Lucas and Mabel") 
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