The Pill

Contest Name :Hard Times, Submission Date :05-03-2009, Uploaded By : AJ
Directed By :  AJ Stribling, Student,,
Shot On: JVC, Edited On: Final Cut Pro,  Crew Members: 3  Duration: 2.97 mins
Crawfordsville ,IN , United States   Views: 605
Inspiration: I have been in school with and known a lot of people that have had a slip up. In this day an age an unexpected slip can cost you.
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Now that is what a call a HARDTIME. Please chk Struggling 4 Success p.15 
it only takes one time silly girly! 
Right direction, but needs some script work. The only knowing each other for less than a week thing makes her discovery less probable. Would love to see this re-angled and expanded. The message is important, but the delivery needs to be solid. 
They met a week ago and she's pregnant...? Seems a little soon to come back with a positive result from a test. Shame more wasn't spent on them discussing that rather than him arriving late & their chitchat before her reveal. Nice film though - hope you get to expand further on the story. Lee (Necromantic) 
a bit predictable but nicely done. hard times indeed. 
Nice film. So frustrating when some situation makes things harder to accept. And to deal with. Thanks... I enjoyed watching it. 
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