Catharsis

Contest Name :Behind Closed Doors, Submission Date :05-31-2008, Uploaded By : Carmine
Directed By :  Carmine Totich, Night Clerk,Morehead,
Shot On: Panasonic Mini-DVD, Edited On: Mac,  Crew Members: 1  Duration:
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Inspiration: Close personal friend and his relationship issues.
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That was pretty dark stuff... If you work on your sound this could be much more intense.. good effort (first on filmaka?) 
really dark stuff ....cool.. 
did he kill her?? this was nice but it left me hanging at the end! 
always there is a bed time story in these days film !change the location be glocal n i'm happy with your script. good job 
Constructive Criticism: Too much SILENCE. Lost me at 1 Min. Kinda sad cause the visuals started really good, and the piece shows some strong potential. Because of the lack of sound, things around me held a higher distraction level :( 
I personally couldn't connect with the story. I think the voice over is overused and a little bit redundant. Sergio 
Interesting plot and style. - Bryan (The Case of the Missing Maxwell) 
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