I like the script and dialogue.
good acting and cool idea!
You made up for any technical disadvantage by having great dialogue, acting, and energy- personally I think the latter skills are more important.
Great great great. Good to see a good comedy on here. I was crackin up! I think you'll enjoy my comedy, "The Varmint Hunter." Good luck. Short listed!
I agree with James, the comedys are good to see, Good job guys!
Really funny, I liked high dinamic it all went. Great short.
great one take madness...
The actors work pretty well together. Funny guys. The one take works fine here. Cinema is not always kind to comedy. But I think it will limit your chances of success.
funny. I would have liked to have seen a few different shots to break it up. reminded me of office space slightly, and the actors seemed to have a good dynamic.
I invite you to watch the animation I did for this competition. "HELP, WANTED DEATH OR ALIVE" i couldnt finishi it for the dateline. Your coments will be my price. check it at my profile
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