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Contest Name :Truth OR Dare, Submission Date :08-03-2008, Uploaded By : Peter Marshall
Directed By :  Peter M. Smith, editor,Los Angeles,
Shot On: DV, Edited On: FCP,  Crew Members: 3  Duration:
Los Angeles ,CA , United States   Views: 2663
Inspiration: Entry Level Winner for Truth or Dare Competition
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haha very well done. probably the best acting I've seen in an entry thus far. great music and funny ending too. pretty damn solid for being made in 24 hours. 
Love the style! Love the acting.... 
Wow, very emtional. 
wow. 24 hours. even if it wasn't 24 hours, still damn well made film. did that competition have a theme as well 
Mayday requires only that the movies have something to do with the assigned title. In this case, the title was "23". I feel it fit the Truth or Dare theme well enough to enter a 3 minute cutdown to filmaka. Thanks to everyone for checking it out.  
Nice work Peter. I enjoyed this. 
Kick ass work here Peter. You did a great job of making me care for the characters in 3 min. Im really impressed. Check out my vid and let me know what you think 
love it. end was expected though. but beautiful indeed. success nonetheless dude. 
totally dug it...nice soundtrack. Nice to see you got a real actress! Randy Hines "Truth and Dare" 
Saw this on your site some time ago, Very compelling and believable, love the opening. 
Great opening - maybe i miss more wide shots is it go along - but definitely great work - 
hey, peter. very cool, man. beautiful shots, great-looking actors (i'm in love with deanna) and cool dialogue. love the beginning, with that wide, long shot on the beach and the painfully frank dialogue.  
lol OMG! I love ir! 
Seriously cool stuff man... Truth 24, Dare 12... then 23.. maybe I am overcomplicating it, but i like dat! 
the long bathroom shot was absolutely superb, and the money shot at the door made me shout out loud, kudos. 
fantastic. you got me from the get go. bathroom scene was superb, i can actually feel his pain. kudos! 
14 votes and nothing to do with the theme...sounds like a typical filmaka selection to me 
I disagree that 23 has nothing to do with the theme. reiverenglish said it well in the forum on Runaway Stars: "A problem starting to affect Filmaka is the increasing number of shadow people who prowl the forums spamming or criticising the work of others, obviously lacking the confidence, skills or creative vision to produce anything worth uploading themselves." 
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