Awesome! has a vote from me! :) 

nice one brian !!! 

Hi Dude!! thanks for you comment. well we wrote about the same theme but in two completely diferent way hehehe. actually i only have 24 hours to write and film that shortfilm because the filmaka team invited me to participate the day 4 in the night so i do everithing so fast. but i have a good team and good actors so the result was funny and interesting. i invited you to check my blog http://pedrocohen.blogspot.com is in spanish but if you go to the "cortometrajes" (shortfilm) section you can check my other works, i going to put english subtittles and uploaded to the web. you do a good job with that film, best of luck, and i hope see other works, keep in touch.  

Excellent Brian, thanks for your comment as well, Loved the nonplussed attitude of Anitas superior at the end, worked well, and loved the touch of Chopin style piano piece.. 

Love the subject, the world. Very adventurous. 

Interesting. Enjoy it. 

Well done Brian, very ambitious and really enjoyable. 

You keep the bar high, Brian, every time. I’m a fan of this genre and I thought you executed it well, no pun intended. I was intrigued to know more about the assassin (her target/the guy on the phone) who turned the tables. That scene on the cell was when the story really hooked me.  

I gess the first day, first mission of a hitman, killer, merchant of death (tm) is quite popular. LOL. This one was really good. I only missed music during the first part of the movie. Anyway, well done and keep on the great work. 

Excellent story, good acting and directing. it took me since the beginning 

Girl Actors were good, nice car scene, shot very well...I may have to short list this one...all and all good job check out PFI: Party Foul Investigation...a rookies first day...pretty funny 

Good work, good acting by the guy when he pukes. 

Oooh, cold ending! I like it.