Pfi: Party Foul Investigtion

Contest Name :The First Day, Submission Date :10-05-2008, Uploaded By : CJ
Directed By :  Dan Brown, Visual Effects Assistant,,
 Edited On: final cut pro,  Crew Members: 0  Duration: 2.99 mins
Los Angeles ,CA , United States   Views: 566
Inspiration: CSI

Funny concept, started off very well, end seemed abrupt though. 
As you requested, I watched again your short. I think it's kind of a first episode of a TV series, it could be very good for a students audience as it is funny, with strange crazy characters, and, of course, because students love parties. 
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