The end was very unexpected. Really good work. Though the pacing is kind of slow, in my opinion. 

Wow-it caught me, at first I thought it was too slow, but..wow-good job-worth the wait. 

very cool. i really liked the story. despite there being a lot of "date con" shorts in this competition, this one had something different. not crazy about the VO, but that's me. the acting seemed so good i guess i would've wanted to hear them, instead of the narration, which was too flowery for me. but the B/W without voice also had a nice thing - like old czech or french new wave films. 

The ending is the best one!!! Congrats