The Magic Box

Contest Name :Smoke & Mirrors, Submission Date :06-22-2009, Uploaded By : Burt
Directed By :  Burt Moody, Law Enforcement,,
Shot On: 6/20/09, Edited On: 6/21/09,  Crew Members: 6  Duration: 2.90 mins
Villa Rica ,GA , United States   Views: 933
Inspiration: weird science, The idea developed into this ... Guy inherits a old dusty box, He finds a hat and note with riddle inside and the Magic begins.....
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I liked where that guys head was at. Though I would have gone for the girl much earlier in the process. Also felt that the music was a little 'too big' for the action on screen. :) 
I liked the music as it added to the absurdity of the situation. Good premise ... the kind that nobody can resist to go on watching.  
Hahah. Niiiiiice! Please check out my film "together again" and let me know what you think. 
Very cool premise but I feel like the minute between the 0:30 and 1:30 mark could have been trimmed quite a bit. But the last minute of the movie rebounded and was entertaining to watch. Good work on this one. 
Very entertaining and comical as well as original and well done, overall... I did expect a surprise ending though, rather than him getting a 'babe' and that's it? In that way it disappointed me. Please check out my 'Backwards In Time'...  
Thank you all for the comments so far, I appreciate all the feed back both "positive" and "negative". As to the surprise ending it was planned to have a "gotcha" ending, but man three minetes goes very fast! I hope to learn alot here doing these and please keep this feedback coming!  
Thank you all for the comments so far, I appreciate all the feed back both "positive" and "negative". As to the surprise ending it was planned to have a "gotcha" ending, but man three minetes goes very fast! I hope to learn alot here doing these and please keep this feedback coming!  
When the guy entered the shot with the big score in the background, I got confused. It seemed out of touch. Like it did not fit the image. But later... You got me laughing out loud!! I LOVED IT!! I saw it twice!! KEEP IT UP BURT. This was AWESOME!! 
BLACK BERRY!!  
Very funny film! I loved it. 
Fun and enjoyable 
I thought the dollars bills were gonna fall in and the presidents would all jump out. Couldn't help but notice all the Moody's in the credits. It's cool that it was a family affair. Nice take on the theme.  
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