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Contest Name :Race Against The Clock, Submission Date :09-08-2009, Uploaded By : Dana
Directed By :  Dana Alan Ferguson, independent filmmaker,,
Shot On: Canon XH-A1, Edited On: Final Cut Pro,  Crew Members: 3  Duration: 3.00 mins
Negaunee ,MI , United States   Views: 820
Inspiration: A story about love and loss.
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Wow. Obviously a very personal film and told very effectively. I honestly don't think a second was wasted. For the last minute I was completely sucked in. Very moving, even devastating work. Great job putting this together. 
good work Dana... moving and compelling. Shortlisted. 
very well done! 
So sad! Well shot, acted, directed and edited! Good score as well. Please watch my entry, 'Deadline'. 
wow that was really intense. one of my favorites for sure! I really liked how it kept cutting back and forth from the girl and the guy. great job 
A very sad story.... 
Such an amazing film! I was emotionally involved all the way through and the style let the story unfold so beautifully. really wonderful. 
Enjoyed the transitions between color and black and white. A moving and engaging story. ------Director of 'The Time Is Now'------- 
Yes, I also like it very very much. In one moment I thought it was to melodramatic and I wanted to suggest you that you put him on a top of a very high building with a cut wrists and a gun in his hand, so you sure kill him and that was a resolution of your film interpreted in the middle of a film. So, you can take out that shots of crying or try to change those personal door shots in the beginning with something else which will keep intention. But I loved a most that shot with a pipes-as-human, they told me a lot about his condition, although I did not like when you came back to use water. Let me see other films and I will let you know if I voted for you. 
beautiful!! really every frame spoke about the pain ..he was suffering  
thanks for all the comments and feedback. I appreciate it. 
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