No Time for Goodbye

Contest Name :Race Against The Clock, Submission Date :09-29-2009, Uploaded By : David
Directed By :  David R Westphal, Man with a camera and a dream,,
Shot On: Canon XH A1, Edited On: Final Cut Pro,  Crew Members: 10  Duration:
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Inspiration: What's the last things you say when watching someone you love die. Please forgive the audio issues (Race Against the Clock)
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shortlisted... a strong concept, good images. You could have gone deeper into the emotion of such a complex moment. 
Very well done! 
awesome film dude! pls gimme ur feedback on my film. 
Good sad, or why try sad? 
Sad, for sure. Well acted. The mother had to have a lot of strength to be able to talk to her son so rationally as he died. I know that I couldn't... Please watch my entry, 'Deadline'.  
Powerful concept and very sad... One thing I would point out is that the viewer never has the chance to see anyone's eyes. The mom always has her bangs covering them, and it can take away from the audience... but still, the film is very moving, especially when we find out who she is talking to 
I agree with Robins comment that you had to go deeper. If mother can not do anything, you can. Death is definite, but those who stay alive are more important. I think that monologue is a problem and if she spent more time in a room saying something personal but You brought so much light, etc. We need details in your concept, specially because this tends to be a minimalism. Detail is a crucial. Good luck! 
This struck an cord with me. Because now that I am a father, I can identify with the pain of losing a child. Not something that I would ever want to go through. I think the simplicity of your approach helped to reveal the essence of the moment. Well done! ------Director of 'The Time Is Now'------- 
damn tht was abt pain !! really painful !! some really emotional moments u have captured mate !!  
very emotional ...and deep inside filled with tears 
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