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Contest Name :Race Against The Clock, Submission Date :09-29-2009, Uploaded By : Mike
Directed By :  mike newman, creator,,
Shot On: ArriS, Edited On: FCP ,  Crew Members: 3  Duration: 1.48 mins
pickerington ,ohio , United States   Views: 549
Inspiration: inspired by a dream.
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awesome film dude! pls gimme ur feedback on my film. 
ROFLMAO! My question is, "Why would anyone set their alarm to 9:50 when their appointment is for 10:00?" A bit of a story hole, for me. Otherwise, good editing and story, especially the ending. Please watch my entry, 'Deadline'. 
hahaha!!! great film! i love how it sort of looks old fashioned 
It is another "joke in the end" movie. But we see the problems. That mask is ruining effect, you could use a closer plan. Time problem is pointed out by Lee. Using a shot with a striping twice is questionable, but it does have emotional point. And the explanation of using a shot twice is in the end: good point, because we really do not see it from the first look. Good luck! 
nice style mate ..good luck ! 
'Out of my way Motherfucker', that line had been laughing. Simple approach that elicited the feeling of the 'other world' of dreams. ------Director of 'The Time Is Now'-------- 
hahahha....you have a good experience of dreaming .haha..great style great sense of humor..  
hysterical! I loved the switch out of the sexy dream and into total hurry up mode. really great fun 
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