Justin Time

Contest Name :Wild Card , Submission Date :11-24-2009, Uploaded By : Dane
Directed By :  Dane Corrigan, Actor,,
Shot On: Sony Handycam AVCHD, Edited On: Sony Vegas Studio,  Crew Members: 2  Duration: 3.00 mins
Sherman Oaks ,CA , United States   Views: 1032
Inspiration: Shot in the classic film noir style. Meet two people desperate for answers. Little do they know, they are asking the same question.

Funny bit in the opening with the glass's contents being poured into the plant. Cool story idea - a little different from what I expected from the typical film noir. The sound was a little choppy but there can be easy fixes - I would suggest recording a room tone next time and have the audio quietly underneath the entire movie, 
Wow! Nicely done! Good story, well directed, acted, shot, edited... Very good ending which I didn't expect at all! Please watch my 'Surprise!' 
I applaud your noir sensibilities, you have better taste than most. Check out my FX entry, SCREWED for a good laugh.  
Nice to see a noir-ish ditty in these parts. I think it was done well. Nice use of black and white for the most part. I would recommend using a bit more of a hairlight for each actor closeup to help make those shots pop more. Good use of music. Kudos! Check out "Bliss". 
wow i must say its a nice short and exellent concept. i liked it and beautifuly acted really Please watch my entry, 'Sometimes...'.  
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