Funny bit in the opening with the glass's contents being poured into the plant. Cool story idea - a little different from what I expected from the typical film noir. The sound was a little choppy but there can be easy fixes - I would suggest recording a room tone next time and have the audio quietly underneath the entire movie, 

Wow! Nicely done! Good story, well directed, acted, shot, edited... Very good ending which I didn't expect at all! Please watch my 'Surprise!' 

I applaud your noir sensibilities, you have better taste than most. Check out my FX entry, SCREWED for a good laugh.  

Nice to see a noir-ish ditty in these parts. I think it was done well. Nice use of black and white for the most part. I would recommend using a bit more of a hairlight for each actor closeup to help make those shots pop more. Good use of music. Kudos! Check out "Bliss". 

wow i must say its a nice short and exellent concept. i liked it and beautifuly acted really Please watch my entry, 'Sometimes...'.