RIVALRY - THE MIND WAR

Contest Name :The Rivalry, Submission Date :01-03-2019, Uploaded By : Angela
Directed By :  Angela Renee White, Filmmaker,,
Shot On: T5I REBEL CANON,   Crew Members: 1  Duration:
SANTA CLARITA ,CA , United States   Views: 3441
Inspiration: Inspired by the battle for my own mind. Good and bad have fought for my mind's 'Joy'. Good won on this day and I will continue to fight for Good to win.
       8



 
Great expression of your mind through body language, telling a story of your thoughts 
The many quick cuts worked well to set up the story. Unusual and effective filmaking technique. The film flows at a leisurely pace which is relaxing, while drawing one in to the finale, which had a refreshing and uplifting twist. Good work! 
Thank you so much for the comments and encouragement! Appreciated so much  
I have watched this film 3 times and I think what I like about it and what makes it endearing is the innocence it portrays in how a lot of women endure the internal struggle of wanting love and feeling that they have to sacrifice part or some of their dignity in order to find someone that loves them for who they are and not what they’re willing to do. One mistake I see and it is repeated in several of the films here, is shooting scenes against a solid white wall. I would caution new filmmakers to avoid this mistake as it flattens out the image. Other than that, keep making films, Angela, I see a lot of potential in your art. Many blessings. 
Nice Visual... 
Dean, thank you so much for sharing your thoughts here! What you said confirms that I was able to portray what my heart was speaking through this. Thank you. AND, thank you for sharing your advice and suggestion on how to improve the art of filmmaking. I really appreciate your insight and will definitely change that in my next piece. I love learning about this art so thank you so much! It means a lot! I am really excited about this season if life, Dean and I appreciate your encouragement for me to continue. Blessings to you! 
VERY meaningful subject matter. You captured a very common issue with our wandering minds and more importantly the insecurities that women struggle with. Great way to show rivalry within our mind! {Jury Member}
@Madchen Amick, Thank you so much for your kind and honest words. I greatly appreciate you taking time not only to watch this first film of mine, but to also critique it and comment here. Thank you so much! 
Current Submissions >

GOPR2278- McCoy
GOPR2278
Directed By McCoy
United States
3.41 min 2
Butterfly- Meliani
Butterfly
Directed By Meliani
United Kingdom
3.57 min 5
Home Episode 1- Chan
Home Episode 1
Directed By Chan

3.11 min 0
Antihero- Nowak
Antihero
Directed By Nowak
United States
3.13 min 2
NO ONE ELSE WILL- dindy
NO ONE ELSE WILL
Directed By dindy

14.29 min 0
Pick up Game- Rhymer
Pick up Game
Directed By Rhymer

5.70 min 0
	Murder On Route 111- Kiroga
Murder On Route 111
Directed By Kiroga

0.50 min 0
11551_Natalie.mp4- Fu
11551_Natalie.mp4
Directed By Fu

7.16 min 0
33419_TuTuTulut.mp4- Aillaud
33419_TuTuTulut.mp4
Directed By Aillaud

3.06 min 0
Brian Smith The Colo- Smith
Brian Smith The Colo
Directed By Smith

4.04 min 0
BRENAFREIDA- Arnold
BRENAFREIDA
Directed By Arnold

4.12 min 2
HOT LIKE HELL- Faraday
HOT LIKE HELL
Directed By Faraday

4.59 min 1
1506_kendnarev1.mov- Wang
1506_kendnarev1.mov
Directed By Wang

4.59 min 0
Thomas Curran Moving- Cameras
Thomas Curran Moving
Directed By Cameras

4.00 min 1
Berlin Diversity- Nashat
Berlin Diversity
Directed By Nashat

4.34 min 1
Invisible Enemy- Hardin
Invisible Enemy
Directed By Hardin

3.17 min 0
Statement- Judele
Statement
Directed By Judele

5.21 min 4
Kids Matter- Horton
Kids Matter
Directed By Horton

0.50 min 2
2nd Place winner
Time of Death- Lima
Time of Death
Directed By Lima

8.14 min 0
Lucis Mortis- Ayres
Lucis Mortis
Directed By Ayres

13.55 min 0
SNUFF- Colorado
SNUFF
Directed By Colorado

4.57 min 2
Hired- Mena Cejas
Hired
Directed By Mena Cejas

3.34 min 0
Losing Claire- Majmudar
Losing Claire
Directed By Majmudar

5.58 min 4
How Weird- Ciment
How Weird
Directed By Ciment
United States
0.00 min 2
Taylor Black by  Spi-Spike
Taylor Black by Spi
Directed By Spike

4.42 min 0
Checkmate-Abdelaziz
Checkmate
Directed By Abdelaziz

9.58 min 0
Ballet is A Piece of-Abraham
Ballet is A Piece of
Directed By Abraham
United States
4.13 min 1
'The Interview'-Adam
'The Interview'
Directed By Adam
United Kingdom
5.00 min 3
Philis-Adam
Philis
Directed By Adam
United Kingdom
4.49 min 0
The Taker-Adam
The Taker
Directed By Adam
United States
12.15 min 0
Between the Crosshai-Adam
Between the Crosshai
Directed By Adam
United States
4.30 min 0
The Differences Betw-Adesewa
The Differences Betw
Directed By Adesewa
United Kingdom
3.45 min 0
Thicket-Adrianna
Thicket
Directed By Adrianna
Poland
4.10 min 1
For Sale: Baby Shoes-Afonso
For Sale: Baby Shoes
Directed By Afonso
United States
4.25 min 2
The Antique Store Na-Alejandro
The Antique Store Na
Directed By Alejandro
Argentina
3.02 min 0
3rd Place winner
Ozi and neighbours-Alex
Ozi and neighbours
Directed By Alex
Romania
3.60 min 0
Jonas Zimnickas - A -Alex
Jonas Zimnickas - A
Directed By Alex
United Kingdom
3.22 min 0
CADENCE-Alexander
CADENCE
Directed By Alexander
Germany
3.01 min 6
1st Place winner
Whistleblower by Ale-Alexander
Whistleblower by Ale
Directed By Alexander
Germany
4.59 min 4
Nini and Tim-Alexander
Nini and Tim
Directed By Alexander
Germany
5.00 min 6
272 Miles-Alexander
272 Miles
Directed By Alexander
United States
3.26 min 2
Inside Job-Alexandria
Inside Job
Directed By Alexandria
United States
4.13 min 1
Cow Murka-Alexey
Cow Murka
Directed By Alexey
Belarus
5.54 min 1
ELKO Desighn-Alexey
ELKO Desighn
Directed By Alexey
Belarus
4.53 min 2
1st Place winner
Purgatory -Ali
Purgatory
Directed By Ali
Iran
3.59 min 0
Isolation-Alice
Isolation
Directed By Alice
Australia
3.02 min 0
4 Walls-Alishama
4 Walls
Directed By Alishama
Namibia
3.83 min 0
Sea-Level Rising:-Alyssa
Sea-Level Rising:
Directed By Alyssa
United States
6.52 min 0
Illegal to a Degree -Alyssa
Illegal to a Degree
Directed By Alyssa
United States
4.01 min 3
It's a Resolution-Amine
It's a Resolution
Directed By Amine
Canada
4.42 min 2

"Its A Great Connect
Directed By Amit
Australia
4.00 min 1
Tete-A-Tete-Amitabh
Tete-A-Tete
Directed By Amitabh
United States
4.52 min 0
Title9-Amy
Title9
Directed By Amy

8.54 min 7
Snares of the Devil -Amy
Snares of the Devil
Directed By Amy

5.80 min 0
Maya.-Anagha
Maya.
Directed By Anagha
India
13.01 min 0
Light Prohibition-Andrea
Light Prohibition
Directed By Andrea
Italy
5.02 min 0
SEEK.-Andreas
SEEK.
Directed By Andreas
Sweden
7.01 min 0
Lost in translation-Andrew
Lost in translation
Directed By Andrew
United States
4.30 min 5
Fresh Start-Andrew
Fresh Start
Directed By Andrew
United States
4.00 min 7
The Phone Call-Andrew
The Phone Call
Directed By Andrew
United States
5.11 min 0
End Game-Andrew
End Game
Directed By Andrew
United States
2.59 min 10
Set-up-Andrew
Set-up
Directed By Andrew
United States
5.45 min 1
Mondo-Angel
Mondo
Directed By Angel
Honduras
4.00 min 1
RIVALRY - THE MIND W-Angela
RIVALRY - THE MIND W
Directed By Angela
United States
5.32 min 8
Once Upon a Night-Ankit
Once Upon a Night
Directed By Ankit
Canada
5.01 min 2
The Switch-Anna
The Switch
Directed By Anna
Czech Republic
3.30 min 1
Dream Play-Anshul
Dream Play
Directed By Anshul
India
5.00 min 9
1st Place winner
Terminal-Anshul
Terminal
Directed By Anshul
India
5.05 min 3
Twisted Fate-Anthony
Twisted Fate
Directed By Anthony
United States
4.13 min 1
Jackpot-Armaz
Jackpot
Directed By Armaz
Belgium
4.01 min 3
2nd Place winner
Coup De Grâce-Arshad
Coup De Grâce
Directed By Arshad
Canada
5.00 min 6
4 Granted-Arthur
4 Granted
Directed By Arthur

3.42 min 1
The Obituary Column-Ashin
The Obituary Column
Directed By Ashin
India
5.23 min 2
We Belong-Ashley
We Belong
Directed By Ashley
United States
4.51 min 0
Last Train To Love-Asif
Last Train To Love
Directed By Asif
India
5.00 min 1
Apple-Bahar
Apple
Directed By Bahar
Iran
4.53 min 2
Aventuro-Barbara
Aventuro
Directed By Barbara
Canada
5.00 min 3
The man who remember-Bart
The man who remember
Directed By Bart
United States
4.13 min 0
Deadly Secret-Bart
Deadly Secret
Directed By Bart
United States
3.30 min 1
Shower Thoughts-Beni
Shower Thoughts
Directed By Beni
Spain
4.58 min 4
Send for the Dogs-Beniamin
Send for the Dogs
Directed By Beniamin
Spain
4.21 min 2
Dirt Tracker-Benjamin
Dirt Tracker
Directed By Benjamin
Canada
4.58 min 0
By a grandson-Benjamin
By a grandson
Directed By Benjamin
Hungary
4.14 min 0
2nd Place winner
Another Night-Benjamin
Another Night
Directed By Benjamin
Hungary
4.58 min 2
I run away even if I-Berin
I run away even if I
Directed By Berin
Bosnia And Herzegovina
3.01 min 2
2nd Place winner
Pin-up Boy-Bernard
Pin-up Boy
Directed By Bernard
Australia
3.50 min 1
The Invitation-Bernardo
The Invitation
Directed By Bernardo
United States
4.17 min 0
Lost in Translation -Bernardo
Lost in Translation
Directed By Bernardo
Germany
4.57 min 2
Oyster-Berry
Oyster
Directed By Berry

6.09 min 4
1st Place winner
Mask of Revenge-Bessy
Mask of Revenge
Directed By Bessy
United States
5.00 min 4
LOUD Love-Bing
LOUD Love
Directed By Bing
United States
4.59 min 2
The Last Time-Boulomsouk
The Last Time
Directed By Boulomsouk
United Kingdom
6.31 min 1
Ruby-Brady
Ruby
Directed By Brady
United States
4.59 min 6
2nd Place winner
Life of a Barista...-Brett
Life of a Barista...
Directed By Brett
United States
3.19 min 2
Bounty Chasers-Brody
Bounty Chasers
Directed By Brody
Canada
4.01 min 2
Godless-Bryan
Godless
Directed By Bryan
Australia
5.00 min 2
Catalyst-Bryson
Catalyst
Directed By Bryson
United States
4.57 min 3
CAKE-Burç
CAKE
Directed By Burç
Turkey
4.36 min 6
Bunny-Busted
Bunny
Directed By Busted
United States
3.00 min 1
3rd Place winner
Right on Track-Cameron
Right on Track
Directed By Cameron
United States
4.56 min 8