The Patient

Contest Name :The Clinic, Submission Date :09-28-2007, Uploaded By : Honorato
Directed By :  Honorato Magaloni, Teacher,Mexico City,
Shot On: Panasonic Mini DV, Edited On: Final Cut Pro,  Crew Members: 5  Duration: 2.08 mins
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Inspiration: Intesive Care Unit
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So bizarre. Superb cinematography. That beeping noise gets irritating at about the one minute mark, but I liked the build up. Nice work. -Brian (Addiction Control) 
Dear Honorato, thank you for your comment. It seems that you didn not check your messages, because I already send you a message and my thoughts about your film. 
Hi Honorato. Intrested way to work with a subject that is very comun .. of course not a comon way to show it up thats good. I licke the photo too.. nice work .. its short but tells a lot!Greetings Camila (Ningún sacerdote) 
I like so much the way you work your cut. Good luck. Fée 
Nicely shot and edited! I like the way you build up the tension with the editing and sound. Well done, Honorato! 
I can't believe how you made such a mundane subject so frantic and full of tension. Great work! Good luck and please check out Homunculus by Vangelis Mylonas 
Really interesting...the build up 
Sorry the earlier message didn't quite get uploaded in it's full form....so am re-typing it..really interesting film the build-up 
very well cut. like it muchos. great imagery too. 
I really enjoyed the opening sequence, and your use of extreme close-ups on body parts tells more quicker than any amount of facial expressions could. A job well done. If you get a chance to watch "Grievous Angel" I'd like to hear what you think of it. Thanks! Michael 
What a concept, with the beeping speeding up, building pressure...i was blown away by the editing, one of the most unique and professional ive seen 
Amazing editing, and great visuals. I really enjoy this. (Bryan - "Lucas and Mabel") 
Really liked how you worked the editing with the sound. Great images also! Nicely done! Daniel Barosa (For Sale) 
I felt for the main character. But I didn't really know what it was all about. Sound off on "The Perfect Pair" 
Very well done with beautiful photography and nice grading. I loved the tension.Greg Karpinski - director of "Clinic" 
nicely done! love the cinematography!!! Really intense!! love it 
So well edited. I really enjoyed it. Definately shortlisted. I loved it when she moved away from the fence as if a dog had barked at her or something. I'm not sure if that was scripted but you can't beat those little moments of truth. I completely agree with what Michael says about body parts. I'm such a face man I've never thought of that before. 
Wow, Honorato, thanks for reminding me to go back and see your film. I had been losing track of all of them. Beautiful compositions and photo, especially with miniDV. Really liked the story and how it ties into The Clinic idea. Great editing. I have listed you. William Donaruma (Free to Good Home) 
Muy buen trabajo, me gusta mucho la edición, el ritmo,y hay unas tomas increibles ! suerte compañero mexicano ! Niko - "Extasy in the Hospital"  
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