Nice twist! The pull back shot at 58 seconds works really well. The music is deceptive, which i think might be a good thing in this case. Good job. Check out "An Undisclosed Undertaking" when you get a chance 

I'll have to admit that during the first half, I was getting a little antsy because I thought it was an over-the-top drama, but once it reveals what the movie is actually about, your approach makes complete sense and makes it pretty effective. Great job on keeping it short and sweet, that's something I'm always having trouble with. 

I liked most of it, although I was wondering why she was looking away from where I would have expected the other one to be. No real talk space. Also, I wasn't crazy about the ending with the kick... Maybe something a little more unpredictable would have been better? 

liked the kick shot at the end....the actor could've performed better.....music was soothing.....need to work on the lighting......all the best!!- jai nat ("The footprints") 

intelligent.... loved the ending