I really liked it. Well done and it's short-listed! Check out my "Backwards In Time"? 

Well shot and acted. Love the mood too. Please check out my film "together again" and let me know what you think. 

Great mood and editing. I liked the pace for the whole short, and the ending worked really well. Interesting work.  

Good narrative rhythm. Switched between the narrator and the main story at all the right moments. Nice cinematography as well.  

Good story... works well in 3 minutes. I like your editing style 

Strong execution of filmmaking fundamentals - camera, editing, sound, story, - the whole kaboodle. 

Immediately got my vote. Great filming and astonishing music. Like your style and theme. And that final line is amazing. Smoke & Mirrors exquisitely executed. Kudos Check my film: The Visit.  

Very cool movie. You built up a great atmosphere and used the theme well. Loved the stuff shot in front of a blank, black background. Good luck. 

awesome film!!!!!!!!please check out "BEE IN THE WEB" and let me know ur reviews!!!!!!! 

Great production! Great comparison of the sadness of life vs. the magic world. The sound goes very good with it too. Awesome film! 

I liked the concept a lot. The narration was very effective. It made me believe what I was seeing. The camera work is great. The angles, the focus. Everything was good! Although maybe a couple of shots need to be reworked because it remind me I was watching a film. But over all, it was great!! Nice work... good luck David.